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- 23:27, 16 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . Template:Lead article 5 (reword old story)
- 01:10, 8 May 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-5) . . Template:Lead article 2 ("just completed" is a less-than-brilliant phrase to use on the main page, given the average time that stories spend on here (measured in days not hours))
- 10:17, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-10) . . Template:Lead article 5 (old news)
- 10:16, 29 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-10) . . Template:Lead article 2 (old news)
- 22:32, 24 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-6) . . Template:Lead article 3 (old news)
- 09:54, 22 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . Template:Lead article 5 (old news)
- 10:37, 16 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-3) . . Template:Lead article 2 (fix another mistake on the main page)
- 18:18, 7 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-4) . . m Template:Lead article 4 (no "the" required.)
- 18:17, 7 April 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+2) . . Could an unmarked grave in Winchester contain the remains of King Alfred? ("the" not required before the name of the patron saint of a church; link to the bishop's article. First two sentences and the caption could be improved but if I do so, I'll be told off for making improvements more than 24 hours after publication...)
- 00:26, 18 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-26) . . Template:Lead article 3 (old news)
- 13:53, 12 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-17) . . Template:Lead article 1 (yuck, bad wording and an "earlier today" in the same blurb. Nul points to Tom Morris.)
- 20:49, 7 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . Template:Lead article 2 (c'mon, Pi zero, you know not to use "yesterday" on the main page...)
- 20:43, 7 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Template:Lead article 1 (have --> has)
- 20:42, 7 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . Same-sex marriage in the UK passes second reading in Commons ("legislation has", not "legislation have"; "a denomination has", not "a denomination have")
- 17:42, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+864) . . User talk:Bencherlite (→Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty: @Computron)
- 17:20, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+247) . . User talk:Bencherlite (→Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty: eh?)
- 17:15, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+21) . . Wikinews interviews DuckDuckGo, Opera, Mozilla, Wikimedia about DoNotTrack feature ({{Wikimediamention}})
- 17:09, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+449) . . User talk:Bencherlite (→Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty: baby and bathwater?)
- 17:02, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+901) . . User talk:Bencherlite (→Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty: rant)
- 16:37, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Template:Lead article 3 (as this change as now been accepted to the article)
- 16:33, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (please check the edit history for a detailed explanation of why I have made each of the changes)
- 16:32, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-7) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (Delhi is already linked as well)
- 16:31, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-6) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (we already have a link for this, even in the version of the article before I touched it, and there is no need to repeat it)
- 16:30, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty ("six men accused" to "six accused", we know that they are men; "thrown onto the roadside" is better)
- 16:29, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+19) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (fix my earlier link about death penalty)
- 16:28, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-5) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (we know it's a male friend, you've said this already)
- 16:28, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-35) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (", however, the board..." is a comma splice. If you want it as one sentence, you need to use a different wording. Remove redundant words)
- 16:27, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-39) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (are innocent better than "were"; "The men, on Saturday filed in to the court room " - no need for a comma, we know it's Saturday, it should be "into". remove redundant words from the rest of the sentence)
- 16:24, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-49) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (no need to say the same thing twice. Give the best link, not a generic link to death penalty. Avoid zeugma ("face 13 charges and the death penalty") and they only face the latter if found guilty)
- 16:22, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-8) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty ("to the accused rape and murder" makes no sense)
- 16:21, 4 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-4) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (Ok, let's go through line by line, seeing as the principal author reverted my changes. "Five men have pleaded not guilty yesteday" - "have" should not be there when the timeframe (yesterday) is stated)
- 23:29, 3 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . Template:Lead article 3 (reword (the pleas were on Saturday, not the crime) and using the word "yesterday" on the main page has been bad practice for years - please don't)
- 23:24, 3 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-42) . . Five accused of Delhi gang rape and murder plead not guilty (copyedit, improve links (including linking to the Wikipedia article about the case, a link not previously used in the article), remove duplicate links)
- 23:12, 3 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+7) . . Template:Lead article 2 (fix typo, fix "the country" --> "the United States")
- 23:11, 3 February 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+7) . . Reports of at least fourteen dead this week due to gun-related suicides in the United States (around the country --> around the United States, because not everyone reading this is in the same country)
- 20:09, 16 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+370) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Reuters and the helicopter crash: new section)
- 20:07, 16 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-13) . . m Template:Lead article 4 (last week, at at)
- 20:06, 16 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-3) . . m Real Madrid defeats Celta Vigo 4-0 in Copa del Rey octofinals (at at)
- 00:13, 11 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (-10) . . Template:Lead article 2 (using {{!}}border just adds the word "border", correct a bad typo)
- 22:14, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+535) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Church of England: final)
- 21:58, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+128) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Church of England: clarify)
- 21:53, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+165) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Church of England: sources)
- 21:52, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+986) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Church of England: no, it's just wrong)
- 21:42, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (+189) . . User talk:Pi zero (→Church of England: new section)
- 21:32, 7 January 2013 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . Church of England to allow celibate gay bishops (minor grammatical fixes)
- 22:12, 13 December 2012 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . Template:Lead article 2 ("Wednesday", not "yesterday")
- 22:11, 13 December 2012 (diff | hist) . . (+10) . . Template:Lead article 1 (+ "Wednesday")
- 21:55, 10 December 2012 (diff | hist) . . (+223) . . Talk:Solicitor of presenter Stuart Hall denies indecent assault (→Title: new section)
- 01:08, 21 November 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . Israel sets 36 hour ultimatum for Hamas (c/e)
- 01:07, 21 November 2012 (diff | hist) . . (-3) . . Template:Lead article 1 (Please do not use time sensitive words like "today" or "yesterday" because they go out of date quickly.)
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