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- 23:55, 17 August 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-494) . . m User talk:Geofferybard (→My edits on lede of bin Laden article: No responses, irrelevant and stale. Clearnng page) (top)
- 04:12, 7 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-777) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→I am soliciting your input please!)
- 00:09, 7 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-3,280) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→I am soliciting your input please!)
- 00:05, 7 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+427) . . Talk:Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (→Gosh, it would be nice if we could get this published.: new section)
- 21:17, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+494) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→My edits on lede of bin Laden article: new section)
- 21:15, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (again plural followed by singular version of the infinitive "to be")
- 21:12, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+1) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (we can't have "[plural noun]s was ...")
- 21:11, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound ((yawn) basic English)
- 21:10, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+3) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound ("terror" as an adjective as in "terror plot" is best left to headline writers. it is a terrorist plot, a terrorist act not a "terror act")
- 21:08, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+8) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Don't use "he" so distantly from suggesting of who "he" is, we know you mean bin Laden but it is better this way)
- 21:07, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-10) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (no need for the excess verbiage ie "disclosed" we already know the info is "revealed")
- 21:06, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+5) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Um, this is basic English usage, again inserting "that")
- 21:05, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-1) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Too too much much use of the same word sounds like onotamotopia or a bad echo)
- 21:03, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+5) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Fixin' da bad grammar)
- 21:02, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-4) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Excessive verbiage, removed article "the". US Special Forces are well known not some oddity to be highlighted by the article.)
- 21:02, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+237) . . Talk:Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound
- 20:59, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Avoid overuse of the single word "attack" by mixing in sabotage with prior intermixing in of "offensive". Also, cut plural. from "attacks" to "attack")
- 20:57, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+22) . . Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Removes ambiguity. Not all readers are as smart as wikinewsians. (heheh))
- 20:55, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (0) . . m Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Fixes rather run on sentence. No signifigant change in meaning.)
- 20:52, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+190) . . N Talk:Al-Qaeda says bin Laden death will 'not be wasted'; Pentagon releases videos of terrorist leader in compound (Page created with "Article should not start with a lower case "a" even if it starts with "al-Quaeda". Please reword. ~~~~")
- 20:49, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+24) . . User:Geofferybard (top)
- 20:44, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+113) . . User talk:Mattisse (→Re: 1)
- 20:41, 6 May 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+5,141) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→I am soliciting your input please!)
- 00:05, 27 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+541) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→The expired (dead) horse is now officially shredded: new section)
- 00:03, 26 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+335) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: thats all for now)
- 00:00, 26 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+87) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→oops - offline till tommorow - not finished with review: new section)
- 23:59, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+543) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: I am not someone needing to be disabused of conflating bloggers with journalists.)
- 23:53, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+184) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response)
- 23:50, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+346) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: whoa now I did replace the live feed citation with a verifiable online text source....intent was to show I had monitored up to the minute developments, not as sole source)
- 23:48, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+776) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: Italics are hard to read I will try bolding them for now)
- 23:42, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . m User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response)
- 23:42, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+470) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: Wikilinks:I have no qualms with taking direction on this it is a matter of local wiki po)
- 23:37, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+31) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Article post-mortem, part one)
- 23:36, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+773) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: The acronyms were a stopgap, and the 108 word version was a placeholder not intended as ready to publish.)
- 23:28, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+654) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: might be of interest to see an actual apology for a minor extravagance earlier...)
- 23:22, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+14) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: Point taken.)
- 23:21, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+72) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: good faith duly noted)
- 23:20, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+221) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Post mortem translocated for response: In process you may wish to wait a bit until there is more here)
- 23:17, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+2,725) . . User talk:Geofferybard (Transposing post mortem for responses; please note that some improvements, many, were made in subsequent edits by myself.)
- 23:14, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+110) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→Article post-mortem, part one: Roger.)
- 23:02, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+439) . . User talk:Geofferybard (OK you win.)
- 22:58, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-435) . . User talk:Geofferybard (keeping it simple and letting the dead horses lie.)
- 22:57, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-53) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law: polishing the writing up/)
- 22:55, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+170) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law: Request for guidance re basic summaries of facts on the ground)
- 22:53, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+7) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law: tweakong text)
- 22:46, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+24) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law)
- 22:32, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+4) . . User talk:Geofferybard (→New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law: formatting)
- 22:29, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+434) . . User talk:Geofferybard (Request for clarification)
- 22:26, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (+747) . . User talk:Geofferybard (Kill '''New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law?)
- 20:52, 25 March 2011 (diff | hist) . . (-2) . . User talk:Geofferybard (Mod title to ==New York Court of Appeals Issues Decision on WWW copyright law==)
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