Talk:Airlines plan reroutes around Syria as potential for US military intervention increases

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Headline[edit]

  • missing preposition "for" after "potential"?
  • either is correct of course, but we commonly use the shorter "US" rather than "USA".
Would look like: Airlines plan reroutes around Syria as potential for US miltary intervention increases

--Pi zero (talk) 11:04, 3 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Journalist notes[edit]

This was written on my iPad. All sources are used. Every effort was made to be as careful as possible, but there is a possibility something went pear shaped as always :( I tried hard to avoid. The second to last paragraph I worry about sourcing wise in terms of crediting ideas. If problematic, please remove if that eases it getting published. The article was written because flyying soon via Emirates and yeah. I noticed yesterday that my scheduled flight for that day (but I have yet to take) was headed straight over Syria but flight tracker showed it doing a diversion to avoid that. Hence interest if they were rerouting. --LauraHale (talk) 12:16, 3 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1980344 [Passed][edit]

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Revision 1980344 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 20:03, 3 September 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Typo in headline[edit]

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The page title has a typo "miltary". -- John of Reading (talk) 10:22, 10 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

fixed --Pi zero (talk) 12:02, 10 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Categories[edit]

{{edit protected}} Please move this article from Category:Syria to Category:Syrian Civil War. Thank you. Green Giant (talk) 17:58, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Stays in the country cat; added the other. --Pi zero (talk) 23:44, 1 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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