Talk:All plane occupants die in Namibia crash

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Review of revision 2199186 [Passed][edit]

Revision 2199186 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:12, 1 December 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The times were hard to sort out; the sanity check on the time zones is the statement in sources that the flight was scheduled to land about four hours after it took off. Worse, though, was the number of passengers; the airline's first and third press releases, both in English, said 28 passengers, while its second press release, in French, said 27; and the third press release in listing how many passengers were of what nationality listed only 27 passenger-nationalities.

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Revision 2199186 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 02:12, 1 December 2013 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • The times were hard to sort out; the sanity check on the time zones is the statement in sources that the flight was scheduled to land about four hours after it took off. Worse, though, was the number of passengers; the airline's first and third press releases, both in English, said 28 passengers, while its second press release, in French, said 27; and the third press release in listing how many passengers were of what nationality listed only 27 passenger-nationalities.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
Thank you for that; I should have stuck to saying '27 or 28 passengers'. --Rayboy8 (my talk) (my contributions) 02:22, 1 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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