Talk:Bangladesh security tightened following Pilkhana massacre and Bashundhara City fire
The above article says the other two committee members are Inspector General of Police Noor Muhammad and Fire Brigade chief Shahidullah. but I don't know which citation to add if the two articles could be merged. This article [1] and [2] both state that Iqbal Khan Chowdhury,joint secretary (Police) of the home ministry, is the head of the three-member probe committee. None of my articles opened have named the other members.SriMesh | talk 22:58, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
- Found a source, and finished off the committeeSriMesh | talk 23:39, 16 March 2009 (UTC)
Pilkhana massacre and bloodbath[edit]
Cannot find the wikinews nor wikipedia article on this February 25 - 26, 2009 massacre, carnage, mutiny, bloodbath where 74 people including 52 army officers were killed and scores were injured to link to...Does anyone know what it would have been named ? SriMesh | talk 01:26, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
- Just a bit pokey,found it... Bangladesh Rifles; 2009 Bangladesh Rifles revolt; Bangladesh mutiny leaves scores of officers dead.SriMesh | talk 01:37, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
Comments on tag of article see history[edit]
Lead paragraph: 'foil incidents.' Unless the fire was intentionally started, you really cannot foil it from happening. Correct double spacing after periods. Remove author 'notes to self'. Copy/edit for style, clarity, grammar.
- RE notes on tag
The original article said, I paraphrased and didnt use these two quotes from Security beefed up across country..."On Monday Prime Minister Sheikh Hasina directed all concerned to enhance security across the country to thwart any unexpected incidents. " and "The government yesterday beefed up security across the country, putting reinforcement at the key-point installations (KPIs) and other major establishments, including the Bangladesh Secretariat to prevent incidents like the Pilkhana and Bashundhara City tragedies."
- The fire is under investigation there are suspicious mysteries which have come to light during the investigation....intentionally started has not been ruled out from the sounds of it.
- Regarding notes to self...noticed that other news editors use hidden notes as well which are not removed.
- Made hidden notes, as I was advised by other editors to say today and Monday, then I was advised by other editors to write in the past tense as events had happened. It is so hard as there is not enough people on wikinews to collaborate on articles or to get articles passed in a timely manner, so there is not a right way to write them. So I wrote the article saying today knowing it probably wouldn't get published today so I left myself notes for when the today used to be.
- Sorry about the spaces they are from starting the article somewhere else and copy and pasting it in here.
- As for clarity, I put similar statements together..those about security, those about the current opening of the mall, those about the investigation. That is how the news press articles were written, I will not put in an opinion of what the statements are pointing towards, as the investigation is ongoing, and the investigator's results are to come out a week from Monday March 16.
- If you re-read the sources, you can tell me if there is something the article say clearer and I am not. I feel the main issues surrounding the fire aftermath which have been released to date are mentioned.
Kind Regards SriMesh | talk 00:21, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
Peer review[edit]
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Revision 787239 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:08, 19 March 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Several portions of this article need work, especially near the end. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Revision 787239 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 03:08, 19 March 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Several portions of this article need work, especially near the end. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
- The above have been worked on and Calebrw has been contacted.SriMesh | talk 03:39, 19 March 2009 (UTC)
Image[edit]
The image used in the article was used in the prior wikinews article about the Pilkhana massacre.SriMesh | talk 14:06, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
Peer review 2[edit]
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Revision 788399 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:35, 20 March 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 788399 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:35, 20 March 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |