Talk:British Airways and Iberia agree to merge
[edit] Review of revision 911512 [Failed]
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Revision 911512 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:51, 12 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: What is a "flag carrier"? which I'm not even sure what that is, other that something that would hold up a w:Flag. Why not make the intro paragraph a little clearer to those who aren't intimately familiar with the aviation industry? If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
I'm going to object to the 'what are BA/Iberia' bit. Not only are BA one of the most well-known airlines, but at any rate a firm with the word 'Airways' in its name might very well be an airline. A firm with 'British' in its name might very well be British. Iberia, since they are merging, might just be a company likely to merge with an airline. That would be an airline.
As for flag carrier thing, that can be fixed with a simple link. That I'll fix. I guess it's a term I've become too used to using here; I'd normally have linked it to start with. Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs) 00:23, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
[edit] Review of revision 911694 [Passed]
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Revision 911694 of this article has been reviewed by The wub (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:41, 13 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: This is clearer now. Flag carrier is linked, and I moved it to later in the article to avoid overwhelming the reader with links, along with a few minor tweaks. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
