Talk:Building collapses, leaving four dead in Hong Kong

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Please make this article longer. It is currently disjointed & looks strange. — μ 08:42, Saturday January 30 2010 (UTC)

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The story has been expanded. Radiier (talk) 14:32, 30 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have improved the style of the article. Radiier (talk) 04:03, 31 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Please remove or move some pictures; or expand the article. There is too much whitespace generated. — μ 21:04, Sunday January 31 2010 (UTC)

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Comments by reviewer: Almost stale but the images make up for it

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Comments by reviewer: Almost stale but the images make up for it

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I added an image which shows the impact on bus services. The route number of the bus is not shown on the sign of the bus stop because the stop was temporarily used after the accident along Ma Tau Wai Road. Radiier (talk) 15:52, 1 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Time[edit]

It was 1:30pm... but time of what country? UTC? Krzysiu Jarzyna (talk) 18:16, 1 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

And what is the original raport in this? Only gallery or also the text? Krzysiu Jarzyna (talk) 18:41, 1 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It was Hong Kong Time. I wrote the texts with two photo's at first. I added more photo's afterwards. I wrote the original texts with reference to news sources. I took the original photo's with original descriptions. Radiier (talk) 14:56, 2 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Add cat[edit]

{{editprotected}} add Category:Donald Tsang Kayau (talk) 13:39, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done Benny the mascot (talk) 20:50, 26 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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