Talk:Cleveland, Ohio clinic performs US's first face transplant
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I CREATED this landmark health news article, since this first in USA gives HOPE to those who are in darkness. Please help in this collaboration. Thanks--Florentino Floro (talk) 06:41, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
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Revision 742122 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:06, 17 December 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 19:06, 17 December 2008 (UTC) If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
[edit] I had updated the article and re-developed, and added review
Hi, I checked the errors and added new links, since when I created this, the Wednesday conference was not yet called. After the medical press conference released the details of the surgery, I now did update this article. Please review the same. Thanks.--Florentino Floro (talk) 08:25, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
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Revision 742501 of this article has been reviewed by ShakataGaNai (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:21, 18 December 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I think the number of sources is a little bit excessive... --ShakataGaNai ^_^ 17:21, 18 December 2008 (UTC) The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
