Talk:David Cameron misses Prime Minister's Questions after father suffers stroke

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Title[edit]

The title is very POV. It suggests that the questions were more important than his father's stroke. The news here is the stroke, not the questions. DragonFire1024 (Talk to the Dragon) 11:53, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1091256 [Failed][edit]

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Revision 1091256 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:01, 8 September 2010 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not ready: As per the talk page. I'm not convinced the private affairs of Mr Camoron's relatives should be reported upon at all, but in any event, it is not news that a man didn't go to work because his father's life was in danger. If there is any news to be had, it's in the illness itself.
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I don't understand the complaints about the headline[edit]

The illness is news and is mentioned in the headline. The BBC reported its effect on the business of the country in a similar way.

However, PMQ's is now over, and this article must be updated with at least Clegg's statement to Parliament, if not Jack Straw's question.

--InfantGorilla (talk) 12:38, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I have added the comments made by both Nick Clegg and Jack Straw, now I will just add a sutible source. Chandlerjoeyross (talk) 12:48, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Source Added! Chandlerjoeyross (talk) 12:50, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1091346 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1091346 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:43, 8 September 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I will share the flack on the headline, as I don't see the bias: to me it emphasizes the seriousness of the illness

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Revision 1091346 of this article has been reviewed by InfantGorilla (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:43, 8 September 2010 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: I will share the flack on the headline, as I don't see the bias: to me it emphasizes the seriousness of the illness

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SG[edit]

Should our style guide recommend a consistent way to name number 10 Downing Street? --InfantGorilla (talk) 13:44, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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