Talk:FDA says Coca-Cola's Diet Coke Plus is misbranded
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I CREATED this health news article. Hoping that you help in publishing it. Merry Christmas.--Florentino Floro (talk) 10:55, 24 December 2008 (UTC)
[edit] prelimanary review
(most issues are minor)
- Paragraph 3 looks like it is heavily borrowed from wikipedia - Is that ok [copyright-wise]? (I really have no idea). (as well, the info seems to only appear in 'pedia, none of the sources talk about it)
- Same with Paragraph 5 (but info is in sources)
- Its says its only available in 350 mL bottles, but the Coke website talks about 8 fl oz. serving having blah (8 fl oz. = 240mL according to google)
- I can't find where it says the stuff about how its sweetened (although it does say in the wikipedia article, but thats not really cited as a source) or where its called Coca Cola Light Plus (again, in 'pedia, but couldn't find in sources)
Bawolff ☺☻ 08:25, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
[edit] Edited
I cut the seemingly unnecessary parts and dubious claims or description. Thanks for the prel. review. Hope it is ok now. I really rely heavily on Wiki english having faith that editors do their work. Merry Christmas. --Florentino Floro (talk) 10:11, 25 December 2008 (UTC)
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Revision 745015 of this article has been reviewed by Bawolff (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:29, 25 December 2008 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good. The article may be switched from {{Review}} to {{Publish}}, if it has not already been done. |
