Talk:FDA says Coca-Cola's Diet Coke Plus is misbranded

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I CREATED this health news article. Hoping that you help in publishing it. Merry Christmas.--Florentino Floro (talk) 10:55, 24 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

prelimanary review[edit]

(most issues are minor)

  • Paragraph 3 looks like it is heavily borrowed from wikipedia - Is that ok [copyright-wise]? (I really have no idea). (as well, the info seems to only appear in 'pedia, none of the sources talk about it)
    • Same with Paragraph 5 (but info is in sources)
  • Its says its only available in 350 mL bottles, but the Coke website talks about 8 fl oz. serving having blah (8 fl oz. = 240mL according to google)
  • I can't find where it says the stuff about how its sweetened (although it does say in the wikipedia article, but thats not really cited as a source) or where its called Coca Cola Light Plus (again, in 'pedia, but couldn't find in sources)

Bawolff 08:25, 25 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Edited[edit]

I cut the seemingly unnecessary parts and dubious claims or description. Thanks for the prel. review. Hope it is ok now. I really rely heavily on Wiki english having faith that editors do their work. Merry Christmas. --Florentino Floro (talk) 10:11, 25 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]