Talk:Gay marriage banned in three states; other ballot measures decided

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I find the third paragraph a bit confusing as someone not familiar with california gay rights stuff. I also think it should be made clearer as to which issue Melissa Etheridge is commenting on. But other then that-looks good. Bawolff ☺☻ 04:40, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

So far all good, except I can't find the source mentioning that the South Dakota law would probably be declared unconstitutional, and anything mentioning Micheal Cloud's name. Bawolff ☺☻ 06:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
The unconstitutional thing should be mentioned in the Guardian article. And Michael Cloud is mentioned in the Wikipedia article linked under "elimination of the income tax" in the article body, guess I should add a source link. --TUFKAAP (talk) 06:56, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
With that change, the article is fully ready to be published in my opinion :). Bawolff ☺☻ 07:02, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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Date? [edit]

Is the date for this right? The story was filed on the 8th, but published to the Main Page on the 9th, (8th by West Coast time). --InfantGorilla (talk) 23:27, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

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