Talk:Illinois jury sentences Brian Dugan to death
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[edit] Review of revision 911261 [Failed]
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Revision 911261 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:44, 12 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Quite a good story, but needs a few stylistic adjustments and a few more sources. Some comments from lawyers etc would be great. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
[edit] Review of revision 911853 [Passed]
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Revision 911853 of this article has been reviewed by Computerjoe (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 00:00, 14 November 2009 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Not 100% about 'The jury has been empaneled', but otherwise a good article and that's no reason to fail the article. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
[edit] New category
{{editprotected}} Category:DuPage County, Illinois Benny the mascot (talk) 03:33, 9 February 2010 (UTC)
Done --Brian McNeil / talk 18:08, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
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