Talk:Japan beats Aussie Spirit in first two games of series

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Reporter notes[edit]

I have a copy of the roster for who played but it was not included in the notes below. I can provide this if necessary. Just forgot to attach to the PDF. :( Major apologies for the lack of clear writing. :( The notes were taken by myself and User:Hawkeye7 who attended the game with me. Hence the writing changes. The substance of the report is mostly game notes so not a particularly big deal. Holes were filled in by ACT softball related people sitting in the stands.

--LauraHale (talk) 00:29, 22 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Roster sheet[edit]

Because I realised for one part, I was looking at the ACT roster sheet... I will post the correct one here.

Aussie Spirit

Uniform #, name, batting order, position
16 Porter, Stacey, 1, 5
29 Long-Droppert, Verity, 2, 8
15 De Blaes, Brenda, 3, DP
25 Forkin, Chelsea, 4, 7
34 Stevenson, Jodie, 5, 2
27 Bowering, Jodie, 6, 3
2 Warwick, Clare, 7, 6
4 McManus Stacey, 8, 4
17 Godfrey, Leigh, 9, 9
19 Stokes, Vanessa, Flex, 1

Bench

32 Parnaby, Kaia
1 Wall, Jade
3 Cox, Michelle
10 McCallum, Jocelyn
11 Smethurst, Justine
12 Tollenaere, Kym
14 Holden, Sandra
20 Weaver, Melinda
22 White, Belinda
31 Murch, Aimee

--LauraHale (talk) 01:24, 22 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review notes[edit]

Reconstructed from notes/article correlation:

11 Rie Mishiyama
6 Yuikiyo Mine
25 Yamato Fujita
26 Yukina Seki
15 Yamada
8 Kawano
28 Mani Souma
23 Kazuki Watanabe
18 Shizuyo Hamamoto
21 Haruka Fujino
12 Haruna Sakamoto
13 Misa Okubo

--Pi zero (talk) 03:53, 24 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Problems[edit]

  • First game, bottom of the first: Porter stole third base. — didn't find this in the notes.
  • Bottom of the second: "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick" — the notes say #27, which would be Bowering, not Godfrey.
  • Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama?

--Pi zero (talk) 03:20, 24 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1445439 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 1445439 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:39, 24 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • What day of the week did this take place? The article now needs to say that, instead of "x nights ago".
  • Could you remark here about "Porter stole third base", which I didn't see in the notes (eg, perhaps I just didn't know I was looking at it)?
  • Could you remark/act on "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick", which in the notes is #27 (Bowering) rather than #17 (Godfrey)?
  • Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama?
  • These are the only unresolved issues; afaik, there are no other obstacles to publication.

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Revision 1445439 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 04:39, 24 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • What day of the week did this take place? The article now needs to say that, instead of "x nights ago".
  • Could you remark here about "Porter stole third base", which I didn't see in the notes (eg, perhaps I just didn't know I was looking at it)?
  • Could you remark/act on "Leigh Godfrey bunted out but advanced Warwick", which in the notes is #27 (Bowering) rather than #17 (Godfrey)?
  • Is Japan's #11 Mishiyama or Nishiyama?
  • These are the only unresolved issues; afaik, there are no other obstacles to publication.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
Date confusion was because I wrote the article on the 22nd for a game on the 21st. It was played on Wednesday.
Porter stealing the base is written on the side, next to line that says #29 bunted out but advanced batter to second.
Player name is Nishiyama. N, not M. My bad. --LauraHale (talk) 05:32, 24 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1445517 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1445517 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:02, 24 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I paused over the newsworthiness of this, four days after the event. With the nature of the event, I'd say this really would go stale sometime soon; but it is OR, so, not yet I think.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1445517 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 06:02, 24 March 2012 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • I paused over the newsworthiness of this, four days after the event. With the nature of the event, I'd say this really would go stale sometime soon; but it is OR, so, not yet I think.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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