Talk:Jerry Brown defeats Meg Whitman in election for California governorship
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Couple points[edit]
- Since the word "controversial" has been taken out of the headline, wouldn't it be more accurate to write "election bid" rather than just "election"?
- The Wall Street Journal notes that "It was no coincidence that Jerry Brown’s election-night venue was the Fox Theater" so I think that the info about the Fox Theater should be included.
- I'm pretty sure that "Union-Tribune Editorial Board" is an organization distinct from the publication cited.