Talk:Kate Lundy and Tony Abbott assist in Olympic dreams with Gymnastics Australia's artistic gymnastics team announcement

Journalist notes

I can't get the video uploaded for the whole thing. Thus I've tried to base the notes off what I could upload. --LauraHale (talk) 08:04, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1535577 [Passed]

Revision 1535577 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:53, 21 June 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was unsure whether this passage was intended as written: "With encouragement for the Olympians". Might this have been intended to read "With encouragement from the Olympians"? If the encouragement was to the Olympians from Lundy and Abbott, might a smoother phrasing be found? The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1535577 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:53, 21 June 2012 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I was unsure whether this passage was intended as written: "With encouragement for the Olympians". Might this have been intended to read "With encouragement from the Olympians"? If the encouragement was to the Olympians from Lundy and Abbott, might a smoother phrasing be found? The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.