Talk:Right-to-die activists reveal euthanasia for Dutch patient with severe dementia

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Review of revision 1319274 [Not ready] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1319274 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 12:06, 10 November 2011 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer:

  • It needs to be made clear what the news event is. The thing that is fresh. The lede should be about the news event, but the thing it is about turns out to have happened in March. What is it that has just happened?
  • The headline is a noun phrase. There is no verb. (WN:SG#Headlines)

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Review of revision 1319383 [Passed] [edit]

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 1319383 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 14:25, 10 November 2011 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer:

  • Minimal, but not below minimal I think.
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