Talk:Three dead infants found in Canadian home

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[edit] Review revision 831938

Symbol unrelated.svg Revision 831938 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC).
  • Copyright: Symbol unrelated.svg Not ready: didn't fully check (see below)
  • Newsworthiness: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Verifiability: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • NPOV: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Style: Symbol unrelated.svg Not ready: needs major re-writing; the first three paragraphs are practically incomprehensible, especially when viewed together. I wasn't able to get any further

Comments by reviewer: This is news, but needs to be reported in way that makes sense. --SVTCobra 02:18, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.


I was not the original author, but I did my best to rewrite the article into a more coherant form. Please re-review and see if this is any better. --Jayron32.talk.contribs 16:40, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

[edit] Review revision 832847

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 832847 of this article has been reviewed by SVTCobra (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: That's much better! --SVTCobra 23:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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