Talk:Two men arrested in Tennessee for plot to kill Obama and school children

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[edit] Review

Red x.svg Revision 716430 of this article has been reviewed by Cirt (talk · contribs) and has failed its review at 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC).
  • Copyright: Red x.svg Failed: The article itself is short, thus the 2 quotes take up a significant chunk of it. Also, these 2 quotes are unattributed to the media sources they supposedly came from.
  • Newsworthiness: Artículo bueno.svg Passed
  • Verifiability: Red x.svg Failed: I am sure there are more sources reporting on this than just those 2, would be nice to get some additional information from other sources on this.
  • NPOV: Red x.svg Failed: Any comment on this situation from anyone other than just BATF? Either of the campaigns, media impressions, etc?
  • Style: Red x.svg Failed: As stated above, a bit brief, could use expansion from other sources.

Comments by reviewer: Cirt (talk) 05:06, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

The article should be switched from {{Review}} to {{tasks|copyvio|src|npov|mos|re-review}}, if it has not already been done, and these issues should be addressed.

It is recommended that the appropriate templates be added to the article itself, if applicable. This talk page should be updated with subsequent reviews.


[edit] Rescue

I made an attempt at saving this article through a major rewrite using more sources. I put it up for a new review. Cheers, --SVTCobra 00:55, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Thank you, sorry, I've been busy and did not have nearly enough time to put more work into it. --Poisonous (talk) 05:03, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

[edit] 2nd review

Artículo bueno.svg Revision 716892 of this article has been reviewed by PatrickFlaherty (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 13:50, 29 October 2008 (UTC).

Comments by reviewer: Improved and well done

The article may be switched from {{Review}} to {{Publish}}, if it has not already been done.
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