Talk:Ukranian railway accident generates huge phosphor cloud

Suggestions

• Avoid the speculative tone in the title. Also it makes no sense without reference (this accident has not been reported here).
• In-line links to external websites are not permitted here.

--SVTCobra 15:50, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

ok, so I move the links to the sources. The title is just what agencies use here. I'll make it different, would "phosphor cloud in the Ukraine" do? --Bèrto 'd Sèra 16:10, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

Ok, I reformatted the story as we do here, see WN:SG. I added maps, cats, etc. and published. But I wanted to let you know that changed L'vov to Lviv, since that is what Wikipedia uses for Львів, and it's just less confusing. --SVTCobra 17:34, 17 July 2007 (UTC)

Typo in title

The word is spelled Ukrainian, not Ukranian. --EncycloPetey