Talk:Wikinews Shorts: May 8, 2007

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[edit] NATO forces attacked, civilians caught in the cross fire

Title versus lead sentence

The first sentence says that NATO forces came under attact but the title says that NATO attacked. --SVTCobra 20:13, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

[edit] DOE awards management of US nuclear lab to UC-led team

• make sure you add your sources (:O) -Nima Baghaei ^{talk · cont · email} 18:24, 8 May 2007 (UTC)
  • did that Chuck 18:44, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

name

shldn't this be named Lawrence Livermore lab management contract awarded? –Doldrums(talk) 18:46, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

A more accurate name is Lawrence Livermore National Security, LLC (LLNS) Awarded Management & Operation Contract for Lawrence Livermore National Laboratory — Chuck 18:48, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

This is news, shouldn't it be "awards" as opposed to "awarded" - and we use downstyle, not CamEl CaSe. --Brian McNeil / ^talk 18:49, 8 May 2007 (UTC)

Also, I am all for descriptive headlines but this one is really long. If you don't mind, I am going to shorten it and put it in present tense. --SVTCobra 21:52, 8 May 2007 (UTC)