Talk:Winners and losers on UK's East Coast rail line
Quick comment, should probably explain what open access means. Bawolff ☺☻ 12:54, 30 January 2009 (UTC)
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Doesn't make sense[edit]
This doesn't really make sense:
"Open access refers to railways and transportation services that can be available to other interested investors, besides the owners of the companies."
I can't think how to re-write it now, but I think you've missed some words out! —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 217.44.160.188 (talk • contribs)
- The passage is from Wikipedia's article. Sadly, that article is badly written and trying to do three jobs at once. I removed it. I think "open access" is explained well without it - once in the article body in brackets and once at the end in more detail. That should do it. Redvers (talk) 21:13, 30 January 2009 (UTC)