Comments from feedback form - "It should be less wordy in ord..."

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Comments from feedback form - "It should be less wordy in ord..."

It should be less wordy in order to improve readability. For example, "...tribe is likely to belong to the pano language group," could instead say, "...tribe likely belongs to the pano language group."

65.92.221.164 (talk)18:17, 23 June 2011

Ok. Thanks for your feedback. I tried to do my best while not copyvio the source. Maybe you should join the Newsroom and help copy edit articles before they are published.

Mattisse (talk)19:16, 23 June 2011

I submitted your suggested copy edit. It has to be approved by a Reviewer.

Mattisse (talk)19:20, 23 June 2011

Approved. Thanks everyone. :)

Blood Red Sandman (Talk) (Contribs)19:27, 23 June 2011

Thank you, Blood Red Sandman!

Mattisse (talk)20:26, 23 June 2011