User:Bddpaux/sandbox
Wednesday, December 16, 2009
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Wikinews Shorts: September 10, 2011
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Good bit someone helped me on:The alleged assailant cited dislike and anger with York as motivating the attack. The court appointed two defense attorneys, who requested mental evaluation of the defendant.
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Reviewer's good notes:
The trust.org URL is broken. This has a lot of single-sentence paragraphs, which is poor writing style. This is very quote-heavy; a lot of it follows the model "According to such-and-such source, so-and-so said, "Something". (BTW, it's usually not called for to specify which source every detail came from, unless there's some reason the source is especially relevant.) Quoting people should not be a substitute for stating facts; in most cases they're best used to augment statements of fact. Don't quote other news sources. Once in several blue moons, when the fact that a news source has said something is itself part of the news event, one might have occasion to quote them
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Q: What is the status of tonight's games?
A: "Administration has canceled all outside games today. Everything is expected to be back on schedule tomorrow."
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Category:Tyler, Texas
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Accreditation Details
 Reporter: Paul Budd (bddpaux)
Alternate Email address: buddpaul@hotmail.com |
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The Original Barnstar | |
| I, Bddpaux, hereby award you this barnstar for your continuous and professional input (and output!). Bddpaux (talk) 01:28, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
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