User talk:Aw570/Gay men able to donate blood as controversial lifetime ban lifted in the UK

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Review of revision 1285142 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1285142 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:04, 11 September 2011 (UTC).
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  • Verifiability: Symbol question.svg Not ready: "lifted... yesterday afternoon"; "Department of Health said... the lifetime ban will be lifted in November." Which is it? Is there some reason to distrust the Department of Health, because there's no indication of one in the article. As it stands, the article contradicts itself. These are mutually exclusive.
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Review of revision 1286277 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1286277 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:05, 13 September 2011 (UTC).
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