User talk:Cropje/Journalist's arrest sparks alarm over the legality of social networking activity
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Review of revision 1233452 [Failed] [edit]
Revision 1233452 of this article has been reviewed by Calebrw (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 06:17, 19 May 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Article need additional context. What is Fairfax? Bring the reason for arrest/detention to lede (or at least a very basic version). Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
Review of revision 1235006 [Failed] [edit]
Revision 1235006 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:34, 23 May 2011 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I would advise you to look for some more up-to-date information about this story, if you can. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews. |
