User talk:Polly691/Men denied anti-cancer vaccine

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Review of revision 1224478 [Failed] [edit]

Symbol question.svg Revision 1224478 of this article has been reviewed by Killing Vector (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 11:57, 1 May 2011 (UTC).
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  • Verifiability: Symbol question.svg Not ready: Only 1 recent source cited (others are from 2010 or earlier), there need to be at least 2 for summary articles
  • NPOV: Symbol question.svg Not ready: Stronly biased in favor of drug company. "CSL continues to fight to make the vaccine available to men" for example. Only 1 sentence discusses Australian government's reasoning.
  • Style: Symbol question.svg Not ready: Many formatting issues. Headline too vague.

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