Talk:"Too Easy LoL": messages written on cell wall as ten inmates escape from Orleans Parish Prison in Louisiana, United States

Review of revision 4857934 [Not ready]

Revision 4857934 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:57, 17 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1. restructure to follow inverted pyramid 2. address copyvio concerns by rewording passages flagged by eatwig. the earwig link is in the develop box at the top of the article page. 3. check formatting of sources. this is a major revision request. please do it urgently and resubmit for review. Please do not submit article for review if it is not yet finished and ready, and requires a major rewrite. Continuing to do so may be considered disruptive. Instead, start it and then , if needed, request assistance at Wikinews:Water cooler/assistance. thanks. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4857934 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 10:57, 17 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not ready: Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1. restructure to follow inverted pyramid 2. address copyvio concerns by rewording passages flagged by eatwig. the earwig link is in the develop box at the top of the article page. 3. check formatting of sources. this is a major revision request. please do it urgently and resubmit for review. Please do not submit article for review if it is not yet finished and ready, and requires a major rewrite. Continuing to do so may be considered disruptive. Instead, start it and then , if needed, request assistance at Wikinews:Water cooler/assistance. thanks. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4858576 [Not ready]

Revision 4858576 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:51, 19 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I could not verify number of escapees. Started to check and source https://www.nbcnews.com/news/us-news/louisiana-orleans-inmates-escape-rcna207232? says there were 11 of whom 3 were captured. Please address this and re-submit. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4858576 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 19:51, 19 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: I could not verify number of escapees. Started to check and source https://www.nbcnews.com/news/us-news/louisiana-orleans-inmates-escape-rcna207232? says there were 11 of whom 3 were captured. Please address this and re-submit. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

rr check number please

Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below:

1. check last review comment above: article needs clarification about how many people escaped

2. resubmit for review, when done with item (1)

Thanks! Gryllida (talk) 19:53, 19 May 2025 (UTC)

Review of revision 4858996 [Passed]

Revision 4858996 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:43, 21 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have verified the content successfully, including meaning and copyright. Appreciate the revisions. I'm now seeking clarifications elsewhere about whether it is allowed to nick cctv from random websites and upload to commons; if successful, I'll leave a note on the talk page. I've renamed the headline. Please suggest edits within up to 24 hours, then they can be approved without issuing a correction. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4858996 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:43, 21 May 2025 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: I have verified the content successfully, including meaning and copyright. Appreciate the revisions. I'm now seeking clarifications elsewhere about whether it is allowed to nick cctv from random websites and upload to commons; if successful, I'll leave a note on the talk page. I've renamed the headline. Please suggest edits within up to 24 hours, then they can be approved without issuing a correction. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Title

The title says "Too Easy LoL", but the sources seem to indicate the "Too" part was actually spelled "To". Perhaps it can be changed to "To[o]"? GreekApple123 (talk) 22:32, 26 May 2025 (UTC)