Talk:16 year old Torquay boy arrested after allegedly stealing Lexus in Exeter
Review
@Gryllida, possible? Thanks 64.39.81.71 (talk) 11:33, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- Please add region/country to first paragraph. I will have a look soon. Gryllida (talk) 11:35, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida, done and thank you. 64.39.81.71 (talk) 11:38, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- Please check punctuation and write article body in past tense? Gryllida (talk) 12:03, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida, please see what you can do, appreciated. 64.39.81.71 (talk) 12:20, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- Please check punctuation and write article body in past tense? Gryllida (talk) 12:03, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida, done and thank you. 64.39.81.71 (talk) 11:38, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
Review of revision 4850377 [Passed]
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Revision 4850377 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:32, 17 April 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Awesome thanks for editing. Further work is needed for style: 1. For image captions, include credit using {{image source}} template. 2. Adjust formatting of images. The gallery tag may be helpful, or the |left alignment. 3. If a court date is set, add it. 4. I did not add to main page because utility for this is not mobile friendly. If nobody does this before me, I will do it in a few hours in the morning time at my place. I checked for location and date, it checks out. Suggest to make a user account with an anonymous username if needed, e.g. User254324, as this will allow me to wikilink your name on talk pages to send you an Echo notification on-wiki. Thanks for the writing. Hoping there will be further developments and follow up for this story soon. Post publish edits are possible only within 24 hours after publishing, including time for a reviewer to sight the edits. Keep up the great work. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4850377 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:32, 17 April 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Awesome thanks for editing. Further work is needed for style: 1. For image captions, include credit using {{image source}} template. 2. Adjust formatting of images. The gallery tag may be helpful, or the |left alignment. 3. If a court date is set, add it. 4. I did not add to main page because utility for this is not mobile friendly. If nobody does this before me, I will do it in a few hours in the morning time at my place. I checked for location and date, it checks out. Suggest to make a user account with an anonymous username if needed, e.g. User254324, as this will allow me to wikilink your name on talk pages to send you an Echo notification on-wiki. Thanks for the writing. Hoping there will be further developments and follow up for this story soon. Post publish edits are possible only within 24 hours after publishing, including time for a reviewer to sight the edits. Keep up the great work. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Thank you but I will stay anonymous thanks 64.39.81.71 (talk) 17:04, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
Images
Hi @Lofi Gurl
Why removed three images (location and harbor and police station)?
Thanks
-- Gryllida (talk) 19:49, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- Can we get them condensed into a gallery-type thing? Having so many images really stretches the page's formatting out, and there's just a giant white wall. I thought it looked better with only one image. Lofi Gurl (talk) 19:52, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
- Yes @Lofi Gurl there is gallery tag, see examples here? Gryllida (talk) 10:54, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
Headline
I would add "allegedly" as boy did not plead guilty and car was not found yet. Is this OK? Gryllida (talk) 19:59, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
Main Page Leads
Is there any reason why this article, along with a few other recently published ones, hasn't been updated on the main page lead templates? The most last update is the Nobel laureate writer from Peru, Vargas Llosa dies. Since then, four new articles have been published. -- Asked42 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2025 (UTC)
- Updated Gryllida (talk) 10:54, 20 April 2025 (UTC)