Talk:2025 Khelo India Youth Games begins, first time in Bihar
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1) Clarify what is Khelo India Youth Games. Like what on Earth is "Khelo"? Is the games event held annually or biannually? When did it start?
2) How many, and what, sports does it feature?
3) P.S. add image (of the PM) 10:39, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
4) P.P.S. and when are the Games expected to end...? 10:41, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
I have never heard of it. Without such information the relevance is poorly presented.
I am going to publish now, so please address the above two points within 24 hours including the time for me to approve the edit.
Regards, -- Gryllida (talk) 10:36, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
- @Gryllida, I addressed all of the points, except for which sports are featured and the choice of image (I used the official logo instead).
- There were also some troll edits I had to revert. GreekApple123 (talk) 14:18, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
- I reworded "christened in Hindi as Play India" as "with its name meaning "Play India" in Hindi". I now have a tickling that this might be wrong. I am going to change back to the version with 'christened'.
- If you can, could you please clarify this? If there is a Hindi phrase for "Play India!" which isn't included in the text, perhaps adding it would clear the confusion. Gryllida (talk) 21:29, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
- Well, "Khelo" means play in Hindi; specifically, it is a command (like "Go and play!"). So it's a pretty straightforward translation in that sense, although perhaps the exclamation mark could be removed.
Also, you misspelled Khelo as "Khela" in the thumbnail for the logo.(Fixed now) GreekApple123 (talk) 21:33, 9 May 2025 (UTC)
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