Talk:Australian Prime Minister Anthony Albanese reshuffles cabinet following re-election
Add topicRR: add clarifications for 5W
[edit]Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below:
1. add number of cabinet members who stayed, who left and who new joined. in current revision it is confusing as many names are in a long list without attempt to summarize. (optional)
2. for mentioned names, specify who is minister of what in first paragraph (optional)
3. add date to first paragraph, preferably also a location and an answer to 'How' required
4. rename headline to active voice
Thanks. Gryllida (talk) 12:05, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
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Revision 4857310 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:53, 13 May 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Replaced emotionally loaded language (“dumped”) with neutral phrasing and removed an unattributed evaluative statement to align with WN:NPOV. Reformatted a date and corrected terminology (e.g., “attorney-general”) per WN:Style. Reordered and split paragraphs for clarity and to conform to the inverted pyramid structure. Added attribution for the image and labeled it as a file photo. Replaced {{w}} links with local links where appropriate. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4857310 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 21:53, 13 May 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Replaced emotionally loaded language (“dumped”) with neutral phrasing and removed an unattributed evaluative statement to align with WN:NPOV. Reformatted a date and corrected terminology (e.g., “attorney-general”) per WN:Style. Reordered and split paragraphs for clarity and to conform to the inverted pyramid structure. Added attribution for the image and labeled it as a file photo. Replaced {{w}} links with local links where appropriate. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |