Talk:California to require large retailers to have gender-neutral toy sections from 2024

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Review of revision 4646134 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4646134 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:35, 10 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Looks good, minor copy-editing done. Only issue might be the LA Times source, which used a metered paywall - so it locks you out after your free articles have been used. Wasn't an issue for me, but good to keep in mind for future. Otherwise, great article! Peer-reviewed this manually instead of using EzPR as it didn't appear to work for me. --LivelyRatification (talk) 22:35, 10 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4646134 of this article has been reviewed by LivelyRatification (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:35, 10 October 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: Looks good, minor copy-editing done. Only issue might be the LA Times source, which used a metered paywall - so it locks you out after your free articles have been used. Wasn't an issue for me, but good to keep in mind for future. Otherwise, great article! Peer-reviewed this manually instead of using EzPR as it didn't appear to work for me. --LivelyRatification (talk) 22:35, 10 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
@LivelyRatification: The page was not tagged with {{under review}} -- and EzPr is not supposed to show for pages which aren't under review atm.
•–• 02:36, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
When I say "peer-reviewed", I mean posting the actual review, should have been clearer. LivelyRatification (talk) 05:26, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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