Talk:Drone strike kills civilians in Bilopillia, Ukraine
Add topicAI
[edit]I have used a small bit of AI but mostly put into my own words. Thanks. BigKrow (talk) 17:42, 17 May 2025 (UTC)
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Revision 4858687 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:33, 20 May 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I edited for inverted pyramid. First and foremost described location and time of attack, and that police attended. This goes to the top of the page. I did not rewrite, only changed the order of sentences. It is best done before submitting forvreview, though. Further Edit Requested: Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1) Would be good to add a response or comment from Russia. One of the sources mentions it but is rather shallow and I found its report confusing about it. Adding a source may be needed to provide more specific information. // WN:NPOV Changes may be approved within up to 24 hours. Thanks. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4858687 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 11:33, 20 May 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: I edited for inverted pyramid. First and foremost described location and time of attack, and that police attended. This goes to the top of the page. I did not rewrite, only changed the order of sentences. It is best done before submitting forvreview, though. Further Edit Requested: Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below: 1) Would be good to add a response or comment from Russia. One of the sources mentions it but is rather shallow and I found its report confusing about it. Adding a source may be needed to provide more specific information. // WN:NPOV Changes may be approved within up to 24 hours. Thanks. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
RR add image
[edit]Hi @George Ho @Wikiwide @BigKrow @Lofi Gurl @Back ache @Md Mobashir Hossain @Almondo2025, @Dsuke1998AEOS, @Ternera, @Monsieur2137 @Asked42, @Sheminghui.WU, @excelblue (if you want yourself removed or someone else added to this list, please inquire here) A revision has been requested. Here is a list of what to do. (If/when you intend to start working on it, please Subscribe to this section and to this talk page, and post reply messages here when you started and finished editing) See below:
1) Add image of the drone?
Thanks. Gryllida (talk) 11:34, 20 May 2025 (UTC)
Done, I chose the one used on Wikipedia. There are two photos of that model from this year, but in my opinion they are inferior as they show too much of the background. Dsuke1998AEOS (talk) 12:39, 20 May 2025 (UTC)
Developing the lede
[edit]Our article doesn't mention "what" hit the minibus until the last sentence of the article, but is part of the WN:5Ws and a critical element of the story. For future articles, please be sure to answer as many of the 5Ws+H in the lede as possible.Michael.C.Wright (Talk/Reviewer) 21:56, 19 October 2025 (UTC)