Talk:Expected U.S. Senate special election taking shape in Massachusetts

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Review of revision 1755267 [Not ready][edit]

Here's what I did:

  • fixed grammar and flow
  • removed the parts referring to Markey as favored to win and added a source which refers to him as the frontrunner
  • removed unnecessary detail from the lead about Markey's supporters, Elizabeth Warren, etc., added it to the article body, and removed redundancy

--William S. Saturn (talk) 21:36, 30 December 2012 (UTC)

Review of revision 1756254 [Passed][edit]