Talk:FARC and Brazilian Workers' Party:the general didn't tell the truth, says former Abin superior to Veja

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Please translate your whole story, i saw them on es and pt, and they looked great. The bellman 11:38, 22 Mar 2005 (UTC)

NPOV, cleanup[edit]

First off, let me say that I find such articles to be wonderful additions to Wikinews -- it is a pleasure to have a well-researched, through digest of an article here, not just a half-ripped wire story. Please keep up the good work -- your contributions are extremely welcome here.

That being said, there are some serious stylistic and grammatical issues in this article. I've fixed the first half, but I don't have time to do the whole thing tonight. Also, this article seems rather anti-PT. This is a problem. This article needs to have a much more balanced tone, and cover what other observers think, not just what Verja thinks. This article has great potential, but it needs a good bit of work with its style (English usage is a big problem) and its biases. Let's work together on it to make it great, and to the author, keep up the good work; just keep the npov in mind:) -- 03:53, 23 Mar 2005 (UTC)

First you must identify the problems. Just saying:"It is biased" does not help. How can we correct the problems if we dont know them? Please, at least, give some clues, suggestions, anything. --Carlosar 10:17, 23 Mar 2005 (UTC)

I have changed somethings. I hope it is better now. --Carlosar 17:07, 23 Mar 2005 (UTC)