Comments:Felipe Massa wins 2007 Bahrain Grand Prix
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Championship standings stated three leaders up to now, as Alonso, Räikkönen and Hamilton scored 22 points each other. Massa placed behind them with 5 points gap closely pushed by Heidfeld with 15 points.
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A better way to write this is:" For the FIA Formula One championship, the lead is now tied among Alonso, Raikkonen and Hamilton, who all have 22 points. With his win, Massa jumped to within striking distance at 17 points, closely followed by Heidfeld with 15. In sixth place in points is Fisichella with a tally of eight. "