Talk:Filipino activist arrested for disrupting Manila Cathedral mass in Reproductive Health Bill protest

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Review of revision 1105801 [Passed][edit]

A little confusing[edit]

In these sentences:

"We are approaching these issues from the moral aspect like the unborn. Abortion is a grave crime, excommunication is attached to those (acts). That is an issue of gravity. That is a violation of God’s commandment," said Odchimar over the Church-run Radio Veritas.
Malacañang Palace shrugged off Odchimar’s declaration. "We are guided by our conscience. My position has not changed. The state’s duty is to educate our families as to their responsibilities and to respect their decisions if they are in conformity to our laws,” President Aquino said.

I had difficulty figuring out who Odchimar is, as they are not mentioned elsewhere int he article. Searching wiki I found that it is probably a reference to the Most Reverend Nereo Odchimar D.D., the president of the CBCP. I think that part of the article would be much better if this was clear fromt he context of the article itself. As it was I'm writing this having not yet finished reading the article because it distracted me that much... Ok I finished the last sentence now :).

--Merpius (talk) 19:37, 4 October 2010 (UTC)

P.S. Great job, and more news from the Phils, please!

--Merpius (talk) 19:38, 4 October 2010 (UTC)