Talk:Fire breaks out at Chester Zoo, England

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Review of revision 4452185 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4452185 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:15, 17 December 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • This is somewhat below our usual minimal length; the total text volume ought to be more by roughly the size of the current third paragraph (that starts "The monsoon forest habitat").
  • A creditable first submission; there were a bunch of things cleaned up during review, especially several spots too close to the sources; please see the detailed history of edits during review. User:Qwerty number1

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Revision 4452185 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 00:15, 17 December 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • This is somewhat below our usual minimal length; the total text volume ought to be more by roughly the size of the current third paragraph (that starts "The monsoon forest habitat").
  • A creditable first submission; there were a bunch of things cleaned up during review, especially several spots too close to the sources; please see the detailed history of edits during review. User:Qwerty number1

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
Btw, we will need to change this headline; it ought to be a sentence, in present tense and preferably active voice, stating the most important and unique thing about the focal event. Feel free to suggest something here on the talk page, and we can take care of that for you (the wiki software won't let you rename pages yet, as your account here is so new). --Pi zero (talk) 00:18, 17 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

New title[edit]

OK, here are some suggestions;

  • Fire breaks out at Chester zoo, England
  • England:Chester zoo experiences a fire
  • (Chester zoo (England):)Fire breaks out in UK's largest zoological building

Qwerty number1 (talk) 08:53, 17 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4452320 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4452320 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:49, 17 December 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Again, see detailed history of edits during review.
  • I did wonder if we should choose an image that was taken at the Chester Zoo; but the picture provided seems better than what I found at Commons that was from Chester Zoo. Saying images are "from file" emphasizes they aren't immediately connected to the current story.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4452320 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:49, 17 December 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • Again, see detailed history of edits during review.
  • I did wonder if we should choose an image that was taken at the Chester Zoo; but the picture provided seems better than what I found at Commons that was from Chester Zoo. Saying images are "from file" emphasizes they aren't immediately connected to the current story.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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