Talk:Former Japanese princess Mako Komuro moves to New York with commoner husband

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Issues to sort out[edit]

@TheSandDoctor: Thanks for the article! Just have noted some issues that will need to be addressed before reviewing. Nothing major, but just letting you know. It seems to me that it deals a lot with generalities - "heavily criticized in Japan", "a fact that was used to discredit and attack him by Japanese media", "comparisons have been drawn". If possible, for some of these claims it might be good to trace it back to specific people and organisations. The lede also doesn't specify when the event occured - while this isn't a big thing, just good to keep in mind the 5 Ws. --LivelyRatification (talk) 01:12, 15 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@LivelyRatification: Thank you for the comments. Does that look better now? --TheSandDoctor (talk) 03:11, 15 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@TheSandDoctor: Yep, will get back to the review now! Thanks :) LivelyRatification (talk) 03:14, 15 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@LivelyRatification: Thank you for reaching out vs just failing it! --TheSandDoctor (talk) 03:18, 15 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4649926 [Passed][edit]