Talk:Former United States President Joe Biden makes first public remarks on recent cancer diagnosis
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Revision 4862407 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:32, 5 June 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Edits as part of the review process have been made to bring the article into compliance with WN:NPOV, WN:SOURCE, and WN:IP: Removed or revised statements not supported by cited sources, including the claim that Biden's treatment involves "daily medication for six weeks" and that "his medical team are also optimistic." Eliminated unattributed editorializing and added appropriate attribution for direct and paraphrased statements. Removed content not directly related to the focal event (Biden’s remarks on his cancer diagnosis), such as commentary on political divisions and his presidential record. Reordered paragraphs to follow the inverted pyramid structure per WN:IP. Removed test category and added appropriate publication category; removed redundant year. Minor punctuation and tense adjustments for clarity and consistency. Added an image to enhance the article. Sources section has been formatted per WN:Source. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4862407 of this article has been reviewed by Michael.C.Wright (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 16:32, 5 June 2025 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Edits as part of the review process have been made to bring the article into compliance with WN:NPOV, WN:SOURCE, and WN:IP: Removed or revised statements not supported by cited sources, including the claim that Biden's treatment involves "daily medication for six weeks" and that "his medical team are also optimistic." Eliminated unattributed editorializing and added appropriate attribution for direct and paraphrased statements. Removed content not directly related to the focal event (Biden’s remarks on his cancer diagnosis), such as commentary on political divisions and his presidential record. Reordered paragraphs to follow the inverted pyramid structure per WN:IP. Removed test category and added appropriate publication category; removed redundant year. Minor punctuation and tense adjustments for clarity and consistency. Added an image to enhance the article. Sources section has been formatted per WN:Source. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
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[edit]Hi, it will be in many drafts. Please keep removing it at publish. I use it to organize my newsroom copy (linked in my user page). Please keep it on drafts which are not published. When page assessment extension is installed, this will not be needed anymore. Gryllida 16:40, 5 June 2025 (UTC)