Talk:George Garanian, Russian Armenian jazz band leader, dies at age 75

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Afraid I don't have time to do the suggested changes, but at the moment this doesn't read very well-it's basically he did this, he did that. It doesn't flow together very well and I would fix it, but am about to leave I'm afraid.   Tris   18:14, 12 January 2010 (UTC)

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