Talk:Heavy rains start in central and southern Chile while aftershock takes place
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My opinion of this: Disorganized, doesn't talk about the rain very much, needs grammatical fixes, and not newsworthy overall. Griffinofwales (talk) 22:47, 5 May 2010 (UTC)
- Yeah, I generally agree. I fixed the style as best I could, but the article is rather disorganised and doesn't seem to focus on any particular thing. Tempodivalse [talk] 18:15, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Review of revision 1012323 [Passed][edit]
Revision 1012323 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:59, 5 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good to me. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 1012323 of this article has been reviewed by C628 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:59, 5 May 2010 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: Looks good to me. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
- Added some OR (y'all know I live there). --Diego Grez return fire 01:39, 6 May 2010 (UTC)
Edit protected request[edit]
{{editprotected}} Please add Category:2010 Pichilemu earthquake and Category:O'Higgins Region. --Diego Grez return fire 20:16, 22 May 2010 (UTC)