Talk:Heavy rains start in central and southern Chile while aftershock takes place

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My opinion of this: Disorganized, doesn't talk about the rain very much, needs grammatical fixes, and not newsworthy overall. Griffinofwales (talk) 22:47, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I generally agree. I fixed the style as best I could, but the article is rather disorganised and doesn't seem to focus on any particular thing. Tempodivalse [talk] 18:15, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1012323 [Passed][edit]

Added some OR (y'all know I live there). --Diego Grez return fire 01:39, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edit protected request[edit]

{{editprotected}} Please add Category:2010 Pichilemu earthquake and Category:O'Higgins Region. --Diego Grez return fire 20:16, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done Benny the mascot (talk) 03:05, 24 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]