Talk:Hydrogen fuel cell cars promoted in various states, but U.S. federal funding cut

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The title needs to say where this happened. They are certainly neither promoted nor government funded in my country. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 06:25, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Switzerland is doing a city vehicle trial, Ohio just had a symposium, Arnold Schwarzenegger promotes hydrogen fuel in L.A., and the "Hydrogen Road Trip" is underway between California, USA and Canada, and Beloit, Wisconsin is using city vehicles using hydrogen technology. These are the places which have all recently implemented hydrogen technology as promotional. Ohio is funding Hydrogen fuel cell technology currently. So now how to say all that in the title, Switzerland, USA and Canada. And the first paragraphs state the change in heart for funding federally in the United States.SriMesh | talk 15:12, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

The title makes it sound as if the world, ar at least a large number of countries, are both promoting and cutting funding. The article title shows this to be the focus. However, the reality is one country is both promoting and cutting funding. Blood Red Sandman ^{(Talk) (Contribs)} 15:15, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the comment, the title is revised from Hydrogen fuel cell cars promoted but funding cut to the current title which focuses more on the current activities of various U.S. state projects some of which may be a reaction to the federal cut made, some were already planned previously. The new title is longer, but works out more of the W'sSriMesh | talk 04:54, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

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