Talk:Indian singer Lata Mangeshkar dies at age 92

Review

@SVTCobra, @Cromium, @JJLiu112, @Bddpaux 2006nishan178713^t@lk 13:53, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Kindly don't ping me for reviews. I see when articles are put up for review in the WN:Newsroom and elsewhere. Cheers, SVTCobra 14:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Sorry about that!! 2006nishan178713^t@lk 14:21, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

NPOV

@2006nishan178713: Please see comments in the wikitext. This article's NPOV could be improved. Henrymyman (talk) 14:23, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

@Henrymyman, Done 2006nishan178713^t@lk 14:31, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4660635 [Not ready]

Revision 4660635 of this article has been reviewed by Cromium (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:31, 7 February 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There are some statements that do not mirror the sources. I have added hidden comments after most of them. There are also a couple of points that need more detail e.g. we should not expect readers to know "The President" means specifically the President of India. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 4660635 of this article has been reviewed by Cromium (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:31, 7 February 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: There are some statements that do not mirror the sources. I have added hidden comments after most of them. There are also a couple of points that need more detail e.g. we should not expect readers to know "The President" means specifically the President of India. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

@Cromium, I hope all the information is now sourced and verifiable. 2006nishan178713^t@lk 09:20, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Review of revision 4660732 [Passed]

Revision 4660732 of this article has been reviewed by Cromium (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:45, 8 February 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All issues have been attended to. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4660732 of this article has been reviewed by Cromium (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 10:45, 8 February 2022 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: All issues have been attended to. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

@Cromium, Thanks 2006nishan178713^t@lk 10:48, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Lead

@Cromium, can we add the first two lines in the lead summary? The summary looks a bit small, right? 2006nishan178713^t@lk 11:14, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Done. [₂₄Cr][talk] 12:02, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Great! This is the IP of 2006nishan178713. REDACTED (talk) 12:18, 8 February 2022 (UTC)

Edit

{{editprotected}} The caption of the image reads, "Lata Mangeshkar in an award ceremony in 2013," but would better read, "Lata Mangeshkar at an award ceremony in 2013." Heavy Water (talk) 00:31, 28 December 2022 (UTC)

Done --SVTCobra 23:28, 28 December 2022 (UTC)