Talk:International Criminal Court issues arrest warrants for Netanyahu, Gallant, and Deif over alleged war crimes in Israel-Hamas war

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Revision 4806354 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:38, 28 November 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please don't use {{Verify}} in articles which are submitted for review. Inline citations are not used in published articles here. Please use passive tense. This can be corrected within 24 hours after publication. Please add some clarity to the headline. I suggest "International Criminal Court issues arrest warrants for Netanyahu, Gallant, and Deif over alleged war crimes in Israel-Hamas war" as a possible option. This can be done within 24 hours after publication. I've removed "The ICC's actions have drawn sharp reactions from Israel, Hamas, and the international community." as it reads like an opinion due to it being unspecific. This can be re-added within 24 hours after publication after having addressed this concern by rewording it or clarifying it. It is an important detail, and I would like it to be re-added with more focus on neutral point of view as soon as possible. It seems to me the second sentence in this paragraph retains the sentiment to some extent. Thank you. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4806354 of this article has been reviewed by Gryllida (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 17:38, 28 November 2024 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Please don't use {{Verify}} in articles which are submitted for review. Inline citations are not used in published articles here. Please use passive tense. This can be corrected within 24 hours after publication. Please add some clarity to the headline. I suggest "International Criminal Court issues arrest warrants for Netanyahu, Gallant, and Deif over alleged war crimes in Israel-Hamas war" as a possible option. This can be done within 24 hours after publication. I've removed "The ICC's actions have drawn sharp reactions from Israel, Hamas, and the international community." as it reads like an opinion due to it being unspecific. This can be re-added within 24 hours after publication after having addressed this concern by rewording it or clarifying it. It is an important detail, and I would like it to be re-added with more focus on neutral point of view as soon as possible. It seems to me the second sentence in this paragraph retains the sentiment to some extent. Thank you. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.