Talk:Japanese motorcylist Shoya Tomizawa dies aged 19 after crash in San Marino

Review of revision 1090149 [Failed]

Revision 1090149 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:22, 7 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Articles should have a minimum of three paragraphs. Comments by reviewer: Note that this article would have failed even before I removed that line. A sentence does not equal a paragraph. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1090149 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 15:22, 7 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Not ready: Articles should have a minimum of three paragraphs. Comments by reviewer: Note that this article would have failed even before I removed that line. A sentence does not equal a paragraph. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1092012 [Failed]

Revision 1092012 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:17, 9 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: {{Stale}} Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1092012 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 23:17, 9 September 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not ready: {{Stale}} Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.