Talk:Jodi Aries receives new trial in capital murder case

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This is coming down the pipeline possibly Monday or Tuesday, might as well get a head start. This case is up there with OJ on the twists and turns. AZOperator (talk) 02:03, 21 October 2019 (UTC)

@AZOperator: is the title supposed to be 'trial'? --DannyS712 (talk) 09:52, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
I fixed that. --Pi zero (talk) 11:06, 21 October 2019 (UTC)



  • The headline is written neither for an international audience, nor for a reader who isn't already familiar with the case. The headline should make clear to a first-time international reader what the heck the article is about. (No, the headline doesn't try to get lots of the 5W&H; but we should try for the most salient point(s).)
  • Just to point out, don't overload the article; short and to-the-point.

--Pi zero (talk) 11:15, 21 October 2019 (UTC)

@Pi zero: Hate to say this is coming down the pipeline and nothing is for sure, but that is case. I’ll cleanup the second paragraph and title when I have a chance tonight. Hope you are doing well, I’ve not poked my head in for far to long. Got to knock off the rust. AZOperator (talk) 17:52, 21 October 2019 (UTC)