Talk:Khyber Pakhtunkhwa Provincial Assembly votes to merge with Pakistani Federally Administered Tribal Areas

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  • "Khyber Pakhtunkhwa provincial assembly votes for merge with Pakistan's Federally Administered Tribal Areas"
  • "Khyber Pakhtunkhwa provincial assembly votes for Pakistan's Federally Administered Tribal Areas merge"
  • "Khyber Pakhtunkhwa provincial assembly votes for Pakistan Federally Administered Tribal Areas merge"

--Pi zero (talk) 20:10, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 4410230 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4410230 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:28, 30 May 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: No major issues except that the view of neighbouring Afghanistan should be included because this appears to be a disputed region. Also, the article needed a little less of "Pakistan's" and a bit more "Pakistani". The former is fine for conversation but the latter is better for publishing. Similarly, it can be "a provincial assembly" but it is "the Provincial Assembly".

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4410230 of this article has been reviewed by Green Giant (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 23:28, 30 May 2018 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: No major issues except that the view of neighbouring Afghanistan should be included because this appears to be a disputed region. Also, the article needed a little less of "Pakistan's" and a bit more "Pakistani". The former is fine for conversation but the latter is better for publishing. Similarly, it can be "a provincial assembly" but it is "the Provincial Assembly".

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

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