Talk:DNA components found in meteorites

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Review of revision 1270241 [Failed][edit]

Revision 1270241 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:17, 9 August 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: This entire article is only one paragraph. It should be at least three paragraphs.

Personally, I do not approve of the term 'building blocks'. It appears to be unnecessary here.

I think the title of this article will have to be changed. There is no definitive proof that these are 'life's building blocks'.

One final point: What do you mean by 'carbon-rich'? I thought it read 'organic-rich' in the sources.

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Revision 1270241 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:17, 9 August 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: This entire article is only one paragraph. It should be at least three paragraphs.

Personally, I do not approve of the term 'building blocks'. It appears to be unnecessary here.

I think the title of this article will have to be changed. There is no definitive proof that these are 'life's building blocks'.

One final point: What do you mean by 'carbon-rich'? I thought it read 'organic-rich' in the sources.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.
Splitting the article up into paragraphs is very easy, and TBH you could have done it yourself. I'll go do the original author a favour by doing it now. As for the organic/carbon thing, organic molecules, by definition, are carbon-based, so anything rich in organic molecules will also be carbon-rich. DENDODGE 17:40, 9 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Review of revision 1270314 [Passed][edit]

Revision 1270314 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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Revision 1270314 of this article has been reviewed by Rayboy8 (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 18:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer: None added.

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