Talk:Man with knife stabs people in Finnish city of Turku

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Review of revision 4340200 [Not ready][edit]

Revision 4340200 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:42, 21 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
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  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
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  • Style: Not ready: See below.

Comments by reviewer:

  • Does not answer question when, which is one of the WN:five Ws; on which day did these things happen? The lede does say "this afternoon", but it's not at all clear when that was written (there wasn't even a {{date}} template, though I've added one).
  • This is well below minimal length; there's no difficulty with the number of paragraphs (we ask for at least three), but there should be at least about twice as much text.

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Revision 4340200 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 17:42, 21 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]
  • Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues.
  • Style: Not ready: See below.

Comments by reviewer:

  • Does not answer question when, which is one of the WN:five Ws; on which day did these things happen? The lede does say "this afternoon", but it's not at all clear when that was written (there wasn't even a {{date}} template, though I've added one).
  • This is well below minimal length; there's no difficulty with the number of paragraphs (we ask for at least three), but there should be at least about twice as much text.

Questions about the above? Ask.

If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 4340283 [Passed][edit]

Revision 4340283 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:51, 21 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There was a clump of details I didn't find.

The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 4340283 of this article has been reviewed by Pi zero (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 22:51, 21 August 2017 (UTC).[reply]

Comments by reviewer:

  • There was a clump of details I didn't find.
The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.
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