Talk:New South Wales government announces 'Bradfield' as name for third city of Greater Sydney
Areas[edit]
Found area of City of Sydney and Parramatta at Wikipedia in km^2. Would have liked to find an official source for their area, but they don't have a citation. Help about this would be appreciated. (Also requested help at Wikipedia about the same question.) --Gryllida (talk) 21:54, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
- Sydney: https://www.cityofsydney.nsw.gov.au/areas-of-service 26.15 sqkm Gryllida (talk) 22:28, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
Status[edit]
Currently, I have verified all the text except the last three paragraphs -- I can't seem to find it -- is a source omitted? I have commented them out -- but I can't publish the article right now because right now it is more of a quote farm than an article.
•–• 07:13, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
Review of revision 4611060 [Passed][edit]
Revision 4611060 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: There were some facts which I could not find -- some which were suggested off-wiki. Every single claim in the article needs to be cited here, not on image description or city's wikipedia page. Other than that everything else was fine. Thanks for the article, gry. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Revision 4611060 of this article has been reviewed by Acagastya (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 12:56, 17 March 2021 (UTC).
Comments by reviewer: There were some facts which I could not find -- some which were suggested off-wiki. Every single claim in the article needs to be cited here, not on image description or city's wikipedia page. Other than that everything else was fine. Thanks for the article, gry. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer. |
Hi Acagastya. Thank you for the review. Is the temperature plot missing in the final revision? --Gryllida (talk) 18:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Gryllida: yes, since the information wasn't entirely accurate, it was removed and later, the other chart was added as discussed. But someone else other than me needs to sight it.
•–• 18:37, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
Full name[edit]
Is spelling out Gladys Berejiklian's full name thrice necessary (instead of Gladys Berejiklian at first instance, then Berejiklian hence), or is that customary with Armenian names? Seems the ABC source has no issues with it. --Dylan Smithson (talk) 03:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)